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lancefury junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 2003 Posts: 5 Location: France
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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2004 5:29 am |
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godee junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 20 Location: Hawaii
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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2004 2:34 pm |
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nice lines... dig. _________________ [godee] |
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lancefury junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 2003 Posts: 5 Location: France
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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2004 4:56 pm |
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Thanks Godee _________________
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Spiral member
Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2003 Posts: 82
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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2004 6:51 pm |
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I want her! |
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faeklone member
Member # Joined: 03 Apr 2002 Posts: 215 Location: Calgary
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Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2004 12:36 am |
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love it, but I have a couple of comments.
The breast on the left side of the picture should be more rounded. Even though she has what looks like a droopy boob ont eh other side, the flab of flesh that is the breast is rounded and will look so from the side.
and second of all, where's the rest of her arm on the same side as the breast I just mentioned? You have shoulder and then nothing else? |
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lancefury junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 2003 Posts: 5 Location: France
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Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2004 3:25 pm |
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Thanks Faeklone, here' s the new pic...
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faeklone member
Member # Joined: 03 Apr 2002 Posts: 215 Location: Calgary
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2004 7:19 pm |
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Nice. I like it.
Just noticed something, the leg on the same side is a little small length wise and a little big muscle wise in comparrison to the other side. Maybe while you draw it, add a little indication of the hip and the muscle on the outside of the hip that connects it tot he leg. You have it on the other side, and I think it should make the picture balance nicely. And draw in the foot, or put in a shadow on that leg, cause if you look at her, it looks like she's closer to the ground on that leg versus the other leg. |
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