[jeroentje]

I know I mixed up modern times with ww2, but he, what the heck

[The Niles Edge]

first off i have to say that i really like how the clouds turned out, they are really nice and clean looking. i think the whole thing would look better if you gave more indication of the structure under the skin of the zeppelin as opposed to being so "bullet" like, or maybe find some other way to give the thing some texture.
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[Reakshun]

As Niles said...the clouds are tight. Maybe just dirty up a "little" more for the more distant clouds. And yeah, depending on "your" style, texture brings a lil' something xtra to th party.

But, I think the major problem is the ship has a "misleading" light source. From what I see, it looks like the picture has a high horizon line, meaning we are below it rather than above it. If that's the case, the whole bottom of the ship should be dark with no blue bounce light.

A very minor problem, but if left unresolved could be a major eyesore.

Keep pushin and post more!!!!

[CwStone]

well, i dunno. the clouds seem to be reflectin a lot of light, which would inturn reflect off of the bottom of the zep. but i agree that therres somethin wrong with the lightsource, tho i really cant point it out.

overall, tho, this is a hot pic
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