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henrik
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 Posted: Wed Dec 15, 1999 1:45 am |
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Ok I'm a newbie...well on Photoshop that is...
This is just a sketch, (took me about an hour) and is going to be redrawn later...
Tell me what you think
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Funfetus
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| Posted: Wed Dec 15, 1999 3:12 am |
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The overall impression is quite nice. The features are all well done individually, but how they come together is a bit of a problem. The nose is somewhat crooked, each eye seems to be viewed from a different angle, and the mouth is much too close to the nose.
I also think the central part of the nose (the septum?) ought to extend downward a bit more.
But like I said, very nice overall. I'm looking forward to seeing the complete version.
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henrik
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| Posted: Thu Dec 16, 1999 12:47 am |
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Hm...yeah I guess you're right. I'm going to fix those things, but as I mentioned, this is just a sketch and it was done in an hour...so I'll start drawing the new pic as soon as I can...
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