[aznartist714]

hi...i saw this website and i thought this would be a good place to show my work. please critique or comment this picture....it's called MODEL



much alohas

[bleachn]

Hey man, and welcome.... I'm enw aswell, so I don't know how much use my criticques will be... There is definatly the start of some good work there. Are you going to continue it further?

Her eyes, nose and her lip tnes are very nice, but the lack of detail of the hair i think lets it all down a bit, more detail in the hair would really add to the picture... Also I really don't like the big fat black lines that surround her face, and is her hair leaning onher knee? I'm confused there, but my hats off to you...

[Sukhoi]

Hi aznartist714.....

To me it looks like you've done an overpaint on a standard japanese glammodel shot. Placing lines where you felt it appropriate, fiddled a little with colours, and decided to call your image "model".

I can't think of anything as uninteresting that that, besides anime fanart. And tanks and airplanes wich I do loads of myself......

I want to see your ideas. And how you CHOOSE to communicate these ideas. I want to see what you have to contribute, not that of a japanese model photografer. I don't mean to be offensive, but this image does not compell me to think nor say anything besides the above.

But f*ck me. Post some more.

Sukhoi

[The Real Mark]

Good shapes, not into the lines though

[lalPOOO]

that is strange, I am also called MODEL.

Dear AZNartist714 I think that if you wish to progress in art, or in this community, you'll probably want to not post traced images.