[gogan]

8 1/2 std of work.. a wacom tablet.. and you get this ...
please give me a lot of crtis... i wanna improve... i now some shadows are on the wrong place.. and the lightening generally is a little bit off lol...
the original sice of the image is 4000x4444px .. ill never do that again.. the whole details get lost.. and my pc was on the edge.
im almost drawing for 2 years no.. started with manga style.. a big mistake.. but i try to draw more realistic... thats the first pic of my "trying"
(second thread on sijun btw )
so here you go..

here's a closeup of the face
http://www.cisest.de/art/cg/dwfaces.png

and . the big one.
http://www.cisest.de/art/cg/dwgross.jpg

[kinnas]

unless the guys hair is shining and is emitting light, a darker tone would be more fit. for the clouds, get a reference. the moon would be smaller, more round and from such distance, we wouldn't see the craters so clearly. unless it's one of those bigarse fantasy moons, then it would probrably cover up the whole sky, have a lot more texture and a lot more craters. the stone wall background lacks insterest and is rather dull and boring with just one tone of colour going trough. armor, torches, any kind of decorations are recomended. the male skin is a tad desaturated.
basically.. the only "finished" part of this picture is the female face, done very well. her dress is awfully blurry though. and she has a short stature, weirdly short.
colour variation is something to try.

[gogan]

thx. i knew when i post on sijun i get good crits...
hmm next time ill try to think on the things you said. ^^