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Hyptosis
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quite amazing.
Lacks a background into his psyce or even really a hint at it.
I relaly dislike his name. nathanialelf doesnt do it for me.
I think the art is superb and te storyline might be disgustingly interesting. Kepp on working on it, maybe a few revisions to the text, seems kind of choppy sounding. |
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| Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2003 6:25 am |
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I would say that the art is good, but the characters don't look as good as the backgrounds. The name stinks. Sorry, but it does.
And I think that the biggest problem is that the text is bad. The flow isn't fluid as it should be. There are too many useless details thrust in there which could be saved for later. All that blood of wolves crap is TOTALLY useless. Who meets somebody and then immediately goes off about wolves and their blood? It just doesn't make sense and interrupts the flow of the comic.
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| Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2003 6:40 am |
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Ahh thanks guys, sorry, can't change some of that, ,the character would brin gthat up first thing, thats how he is. Thanks for the time guys.
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| Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2003 9:01 pm |
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great landscapes! reminded me of lord of the rings... not really a fan of the charactor style (not all that original, and they don't seem to fit with the backgrounds), but thats just me. i see nothing at all wrong with the name.
keep up the good work. don't get discouraged
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| Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2003 5:15 am |
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thanks
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| Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2003 3:00 pm |
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hey... I really like how it looks, [didn't want to use my first post btw. but] ...i think your landscape rendering skills are AWSOME... your anatomy is good too.. but i think you should work some on your facial anatomy [hairlines, correct placement of features etc.] and i wouldn't be the one to help btw   .... but other than that i like how it looks so far....
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| Posted: Fri Dec 26, 2003 7:43 pm |
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oh hey, thanks a bunch, means a lot to me, hair lines suck! =D
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