[xeNusion]

im not satisfied with it so it would be nice if someone could help me to improve the whole lighting of it.

[Dryfire]

I think thats pretty cool! I think the lighting looks pretty fine, though it could be blended a lot more smoothely though. Such as on the pillars. I think the perspecitve on the railing is off too, I think the wooden posts are leaning towards the left too much. Good job tho
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[sevencrows]

the floor is not exactly flat either i think the problem is mostly the perpective of some parts ..
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[Doodledorf]

I dont know why, but my gut is telling me it could use some vary in colors. Maybe some blues or stronger greens.

[Zombat_]

I love it just the way it is ... I can just feel myself there, its really cool

I wish I could help you with the lighting, but it looks fine to me ...
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[Doodledorf]

Oh! Zombat, that made me think. What about a woman in a gown (I still say blue) on the left, looking towards the right?

[Alen]

whoa... my first thought was a person hanging themselves from that window-roof on the top left, with their back to me.

[xeNusion]

thx for the tip, yes the perspective is abit fucked up at the background.
but as its more a speed pic than a serios the main target is still to get the lighting on a acceptable level...
so plz make some sugesstions/overpaints to help me getting some more colours and better light into it

[Dryfire]

alright, then as for the lighting, which is pretty good i might add, add some more cool colors like blue in the really dark spots. I see that you already added some green in there, which looks great, but maybe the same amount of blue would look good too, making the picture more vivid and realistic. I was also wondering where the light on the right was coming from, because its not as bright as the light from the outside on the roof. Still looks really good though.
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[The Insane Lemur]

i think you should make it an underwater scene, like inside a shipwreck, that would look nice with the lighting and texture

[zeebit]

i think the perspective is sweet.
if it were different, it would look like a generic church.
this sorta makes it feel alive and ceepy.
it is quite important methinks.
and i like the lighting.
the putting cool colors in the shadows was a good idea.

well done yo
-zee
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[Byakko-kun]

I think tis really neat! kinda have a rusty look.
not very good at this so i cant really give you any constructive critisism.
i know one thing that would be hella cool though! a creepy shadow on the back wall of some gollum-like creature ^^ that would be cool (in my opinion)
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[Petri.J]

You could make the room to continue to backright. Maybe something green.
And i like the coarse look. No further comments.