[Citizen Kane]

Now for these, please critique as always. These were done for many ideas part of a much grander idea that I had in mind. My primary style that I use looks 'sketchy,' but some of these would be considered more complete works of art than storyboards, but they are ideas nonetheless.
1st: This world that I've concocted isn't supposed to be normal, and this seen depicts the 'truths' walking under an ancient god.

http://picserver.student.utwente.nl/getpicture.php?id=525711
2nd: This one is just a pic of a nude girl....

http://picserver.student.utwente.nl/getpicture.php?id=525714
3rd: This one is of a green mage....

http://picserver.student.utwente.nl/getpicture.php?id=525727
4th: This one is of a king, one of a long, LONG bloodline represented in my project.

http://picserver.student.utwente.nl/getpicture.php?id=525730
5th: This is another character I've thought of....
http://picserver.student.utwente.nl/getpicture.php?id=525731

6th: This picture was screwed up beyond repair, but I wanted to see what people thought of my egg creatures....the point was to take an inanimate object and 'breathe' life into it just by movements and stance. I think the the eggs look menacing and edible.


http://picserver.student.utwente.nl/getpicture.php?id=525738

Just had to play around with the color styling.
- So, what d'you guys think of colors, layout, just your thoughts; they'd be greatly taken into consideration.
- Created in Photoshop 6, and Painter 7/ about 30 minutes inked and easily colored.
OH, and I don't want people to be mean again, and also don't just say "great job," put some effort, and critique please. Because, if people don't critique, I won't know what to improve....
More..

http://picserver.student.utwente.nl/getpicture.php?id=525754

http://picserver.student.utwente.nl/getpicture.php?id=525756

[Citizen Kane]

Um, I know the works are sort of 'unorthodox' compared to what you're used to seeing, but could someone please comment?

[ColdKodiak]

interesting stuff. I like where you're going with the negative image pictures, but they could be refined a little more.

Generally I'd say try to keep more in touch with what's going on lighting wise; you'll get a lot more interesting development going on if you do.

Also avoid random lines... it is inherent to fill your images by placing random lines or strokes, but don't. Take your time and think about what you want in the end before you commit yourself to something.

Keep working... and also if noone replies don't feel bad. It happens a lot around here, whether you're good or bad. Just wait a little more, and if you image is gonna drop off the page without a reply, don't fret. Just let it, then post something amazing later
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