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Anghiari · junior member Member # Joined: 09 Nov 2002 Posts: 7

random pencil drawing

marcuslm · Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 5:28 am

Really great pic! I love it.

Yaseck · Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 10:04 am

Powerfull. Too industrial for me, but very powerfull.
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aflyingbishop · Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2003 7:41 am

I really like it, but it seems to have too many wires. Cool though.

diced · junior member Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2003 Posts: 22

This is a pretty much flawless piece; you have a great understanding of structure. And you will probably not be fixing it, but anyways let me try to find what I find poor:

The backpack tubes are very high on his back, though the do not go very far down his back, and therefore it will be painful to carry, and since they are not really connected very well (a few centimetres actually connects between the tubes and the body) they would most likely fall off. but hey it�s the future they probably got some very good glue.

the light sources direction is illogical since, because it seems to be coming from the right, but his left (my right) foot is lit on the right side and therefore there is one more, if there were two light sources the tubes would look different.

The multiple black lines that represent his "joints" are done fairly random and a bit blurred and therefore ruin the sharpness and detail that you have got going, though you ARE working with pencils...

Other than that it is a great effort, and you have a lot of talent in your fingertips. Hope to see more art from you!