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Keating
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 2:24 pm     Reply with quote
This is an illustration I've been working on recently. It started out as a speedpaint but I liked what came up so I decided to work on it some more. Anyway, crits and comments are more than welcome. I'm pretty happy with the picture overall, mostly it's the nearest hand that's causing me problems both in positioning and general appearnce. Anyway, crit away Smile


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 2:29 pm     Reply with quote
Oh yea, dude!, Oh yea, I really liked the speedy you posted with this picture and I was gonna say to you that you shouldn�t finish it even more cause sometimes pictures can suffer from over-working them, but, you finished off the picture very good I really like it, very nice. :)

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 7:16 pm     Reply with quote
Should the near hand be a fair bit bigger due to the foreshortening?
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 8:07 am     Reply with quote
Matthew: Yeah, I'm always afraid of overworking something and killing the energy behind it. But, in this case, I wanted to see if I could bring up the detail a bit and have things more fully fleshed out. I think it worked out pretty well.

Scallywag: Well, the nearest hand is quite a bit larger due to the foreshortening. You mean it should be bigger still? I think i'd disagree on that.
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