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Dodge member
Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2003 Posts: 52 Location: uk
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Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 8:10 am |
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work in progress, background needs to be added and maybe the shading this is where im at so far. Comments crits welcomed
Last edited by Dodge on Sun Dec 18, 2005 6:24 am; edited 1 time in total |
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mindlesswraith junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2002 Posts: 48
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Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 11:39 am |
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Everything is very clean and well done, but the guy on the right looks as if he's leaning forward and I'd also say his pose is a bit static considering all of the action going on. |
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dfacto member
Member # Joined: 06 Sep 2003 Posts: 130 Location: Germany
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Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 12:38 pm |
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agree with the post above, he shouldn't be leaning forward so statically, he should be in a "I am throwing a big-ass punch" pose. _________________ It has been clinically proven that other people's pain IS funny. |
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mat987 junior member
Member # Joined: 16 Nov 2003 Posts: 21
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Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 6:24 pm |
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i too agree with what has been said, perhaps you can slightly bend his right leg to make it looks like he is absorbing the block? |
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Dodge member
Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2003 Posts: 52 Location: uk
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Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2003 10:59 am |
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thanks for the comments. ive readdressed some of the points and added backdrop and some shading, not really happy with it but i think ill move onto something else now. |
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