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bellas member
Member # Joined: 24 Aug 2003 Posts: 84 Location: spain
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 6:26 am |
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my last job crits and comments please ^n_n^
![](http://www.iespana.es/bellasart/dibujos/manantial.jpg) _________________ Freeline - freelyne.deviantart.com |
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Feinam junior member
Member # Joined: 22 Jan 2003 Posts: 27 Location: Seattle, WA
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Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2003 5:23 pm |
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Bellas, I'm surprised noone has commented. I enjoy the overall balance to this piece, and it somehow reminds me of tarot cards... Personally I'd love it if I could see the background mountain/waterfall just a little more. |
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nexykun member
Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2003 Posts: 85
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Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2003 6:53 pm |
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cool stuff only crit i can come up with and this is nit picky at best is that the trees look a little see through on some of the branches and the water rocks seem a bit undeveloped but thats prolly so they dont distract from the girl _________________ "HUGBIES!!"-freakazoid |
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bellas member
Member # Joined: 24 Aug 2003 Posts: 84 Location: spain
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Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2003 8:53 am |
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thanks for your comments feinam and nexykun ^^ I will continue working to improve my trees, see you _________________ Freeline - freelyne.deviantart.com |
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