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Dylon · Posted: Mon Dec 06, 1999 3:10 pm

Hi, I don't know if I've ever shown one of my original sketches here... so here goes:

Don't need your critique on this one, just tell me if you like it

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-Dylon

http://ellipse.cjb.net/

[This message has been edited by Dylon (edited December 06, 1999).]

TurboYVR · Posted: Mon Dec 06, 1999 5:04 pm

maybe I would like it, if it weren't a little white box with a little red X....

Dylon · Posted: Mon Dec 06, 1999 5:09 pm

???

The image works on my computer...

Jeezus · Posted: Mon Dec 06, 1999 5:13 pm

nope, cant really say i like the image.

Dylon · Posted: Mon Dec 06, 1999 5:24 pm

Okay, fixed the image, now tell me what you think.

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-Dylon

http://ellipse.cjb.net/

immi · Posted: Mon Dec 06, 1999 5:46 pm

i dont really like it either-not enough contrast, get a friggin 6B pencil man.

Jeezus · Posted: Mon Dec 06, 1999 8:09 pm

immi, no! dont critique it, he doesnt want that! although he could certainly gain some valuble input, he's not looking for it.

ka0z · Posted: Mon Dec 06, 1999 9:33 pm

sorry, not really.

Trance-R · Posted: Mon Dec 06, 1999 10:29 pm

Hey, the horn looks nice. And doesn't that skin take a long time 2 do?
And yeah, add more contrast to it.

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immi · Posted: Mon Dec 06, 1999 11:12 pm

Sorry my bad. (I shall proceed to smack myself silly) mental note immigrant:when one of those goddamn yanks says no critique, dont do a goddamn critique even if it small

SPike.CoM · Posted: Tue Dec 07, 1999 7:50 am

It's in the "okay" bit in scale of grateness. It's not the worst picture I've seen so far (and trust me, I've seen worser

).

Anyways, the style is a bit static. Try drawing dynamic stuff, dude. Cheers and good luck!

Dylon · Posted: Tue Dec 07, 1999 3:08 pm

Thanks Spike.Com. Glad there is someone here who can show their maturity.

Thanks to Trance-R too.

I honestly don't see what is so bad about my picture, aside from the contrast (I will change that). That is how I saw that creature in my mind, that's how it got transfered on paper. I guess my mind is broken then

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-Dylon

http://ellipse.cjb.net/

[This message has been edited by Dylon (edited December 07, 1999).]

Jeezus · Posted: Tue Dec 07, 1999 5:21 pm

well if you dont see what's so bad with it, that's why you would ask for a critique. instead, it sounded like you were just looking for some praise. so here's what i would fix up with it.. add some contrast, like, darker more defined areas. also try to add some depth to the drawing. the scales seem so set up, like, they dont fade off or get smaller near the edges. it kinda looks like a stamp. that's it really.. some angle would have been nice

Dylon · Posted: Tue Dec 07, 1999 6:26 pm

Okay, thanks. I don't really have a lot of time to set up nice messages on a board... so that's why my question (or statement) was unclear.

That's a lot of work there Jeezus, but I'll try anyways.

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-Dylon

http://ellipse.cjb.net/