[piter]

i'm a bit worried that the legs/feet don't look quite right... anyone?

[Capt. Fred]

Right now I think she would topple. I think for this particular arrangement of legs the feet cannot share the same spot, the lower leg's foot must be farther back / the other leg's foot must be further forward. i don't know tho. Try standing in the pose for yourself.

The other thing that struck me (very gently) was that the head/neck balance/positioning doesn't look so graceful and elegant as your usual. Looks stiffer and more awkward.. does it need to go down and right a bit? you know best.

[piter]

thanks for the comments, capt. fred. i think i made a slight fix that helps (not shown), though i didn't move the front foot much. i found that putting in the back foot, slightly more forward helps.

i don't see what you mean by the head position...

anyways... i'm working on the larger final drawing now.

[neff]

I dont like her face and her shoulders are too broad.
Her right "under"-leg (dont know the right word is too short.

But the Armor looks really cool. Give her more of that!
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