[A-13]

Well, you can have a field day with this- I know it's bad, I can easily tell. But that's why it's in WIP, and that's why I'm asking for help. I can't quite pin down exactly what's so blaringly bad about this, but it's gotta be something with the basic shape of the head. It looks distorted...should I bring the right side in closer? The hair also sucks, but my concern is making it look human first. The eyes also seem a bit lopsided...all well, and help is greatly appreciated.

There's also a simple logo I did, if you'd like to say anything about that...
My normal image host is down, it's gonna have to be a link
http://www.freehosting.hostrave.com/p/zci/sppcgl.htm
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[Al Ian]

Hope this gives you an idea.



Make sure you draw what you see, not what you think you see. Even if it feels wierd.
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[Matthew]

Hello A-13

There was a thread about this and it is a thing that has to do with that maybe you hold your paper a bit twisted, that way some sketches and such comes out twisted.
I post the thread here, be sure to check all the answers and comments in this thread.

http://forums.sijun.com/viewtopic.php?p=316645&highlight=#316645

keep it up and I hope this thread helped you.
Matthew

[AndyT]

I think Al Ian's image should help.
The features are drawn as if it was a front view.

I'd check out Drawing The Heads And Hands ...
http://www.fineart.sk/index.php?s_offset=0&cat=14
http://www.fineart.sk/photos/loomis_heads/031.JPG
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[A-13]

Hey, thanks for the help- I did realize that after I got to that point, I was trying to move the entire head around the face to line it up. The post about the skewing is really good, I'll have to look more into that. Again, thanks for your help, I'm off to attempt a fix.
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