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Skillet!
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 11, 2003 12:00 pm     Reply with quote
Photoshop and many, many countless hours spread over the time of a couple months I think.

Anyway, I would like critiques on this, I'm always still learning, so point out things that would strike you as odd, or things you really like. Either-or is okay. Smile


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PostPosted: Tue Nov 11, 2003 12:26 pm     Reply with quote
I really like the sky, the overall composition is pretty neat too!

But, You should really be working on defining materials, gettin rid of the plastic look. Understanding lighting and shadow better prevents alot of that.

I can see that you put some heavy effort into this piece, good job.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 11, 2003 7:22 pm     Reply with quote
Part I don't like: Inconsistent depth of field (if foreground in focus and middle ground out of focus then background can't be in focus again.

Parts I like: The clouds and the rock in the foreground.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 12, 2003 8:26 pm     Reply with quote
Rocks in the foreground looks like it could be the Skin of some animal. Maybe that guy shot his lunch after crashing his plane and now he's chowing down. Razz
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