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piter
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just finished this one... i'm very happy with it. comments and suggestions welcome as usual. 
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neff
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| Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2003 4:53 am |
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Well, what should i say?
I's a Piter. Its great.
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| Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2003 9:45 am |
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| looks good, the wings might be lacking a little depth though |
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| Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2003 10:07 am |
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thanks neff. 
returner: yes, i think you're right. i'll try to fix that tonight... |
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| Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2003 10:15 am |
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thats cool whatd u do it with .. it kinda looks like u used brush and ink
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| Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2003 11:18 am |
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thanks, killer napkins.
i used a letraset marker on cartidge paper. |
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| Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 6:15 pm |
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a slightly improved version?
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| Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 4:47 am |
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In my opinion, you have to define the main-shapes in the picture, like the outlines etc, if you like to put more details into it.
Hope you understand 
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| Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 5:56 am |
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| sortof... can you clarify? maybe with a specific example relating to my drawing. |
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| Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 5:58 am |
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| wow, very impressive, stylish pointy lady |
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neff
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| Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 8:48 am |
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Sure, it lost a part of his easy "flow",
but i think, if you would seperate the parts of your drawing better,
details wouldnt confuse the viewer too much... urhm, damn, my english is as bad as it could be...
here, i print it and did a little "re-ink" to show:
Hope you dont mind.
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| Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 10:06 am |
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thanks, and don't worry, i don't mind. i see what you mean... i think i still prefer mine better. though now that i've seen a version with more detail, i can see areas where i can add some.
thanks neff. |
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| Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 2:42 pm |
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thats really cool man .. i love the style u got.. its awesome
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