[dfacto]

Hey, finally got internet back after a brief hiatus. Well anyway, I came up with a concept for an advanced autogyro (look it up if you don't know what those are). I penned it in photoshop and then colored it. I'm not quite done, but for the most part the shading is layed down. I have to do the cockpit highlights, the turbine needs more work but I am not sure how (ideas ) and I don't like that thing in the middle, to the right of the propeller. Give me crits on the coloring job if ya please


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[dfacto]

122 posts and why isn't anyone responding I KNOW its not horrible, even though it isn't great, but I still would like people's opinions on it. Thats why I posted it in this forum anyway.
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[Tinusch]

Because the image isn't there.

[dfacto]

really , let me check on that


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Well, my monthly usage on the site is in the green...I can see the picture...I checked the path and it works...are you SURE you can't see it?
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[Tinusch]

Oh, it's back up now.

It looks pretty nice, very clean and sharp. I think the shading needs some work, as it doesn't really suggest any form. I think the blotchy, Cloud-filter-ish textures really detract from the piece, making it look unnecessarily messy. If those were meant as a texture, maybe make them a different color, or make them a lot sharper and rougher. As for the rest of the shading, don't be afraid of contrast. This thing is supposed to be shiny and smooth, I assume? It looks a little like rubber now with all the smooth gradients and blotches. Contrast!

[dfacto]

actually, the cloudy thing is the camo paint scheme, like on the JSF or F-22 fighter, but I can take it off if I choose, and I do agree about the contrast. Thanx tinusch
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