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XIA
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 Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2003 11:58 am |
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Yeah she's realy bad girl  But few sugesestions :
1.You could do a little bit detailed and color balanced background.
2.She has huge shoes 
3.She is beautiful
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| Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2003 12:01 pm |
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also the hand holding the spear is kinda big.
BUT I do like how it looks. Truthfully it could be tightened up alot more (it's apparent you spent a good time on the face... but mostly on the face), and the background just isn't there.
I like where it's going. Also as a suggestion, you might want to try some harder contrasting colors to get more depth to the picture, or try it next time. Either way, she looks very good 
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| Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2003 1:55 pm |
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XIA, hey, I think I saw this one as a thunderdome piece aswell, very nice. :)
You are a master with poses and different characters.
see you
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| Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2003 5:38 am |
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heh, there are a few of these T-dome entries all over the other forums too. Well, glad to know i'm not the only one. Great work. We were up against some stiff competition!
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| Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2003 9:11 am |
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xia, plz always be careful of the perspective, its a little bit off in the background that the environment is not precisely enough described.or, instead,make them abstracter,blurer,flater whatever, just dont let peeps easily find things to crit yeah subtle lighting is not easy to deal with because values are much more delicate than those under a strong light source. well generally they are the same, just try to understand how lighting works on shapes, it takes time, me learning too.
i know this is not you wanted, just did something to show what i mean, hope that helps
btw, i really dig her expression, very cool |
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| Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2003 12:31 pm |
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wasssup, dude, that is some tight over-paint, very nice. :)
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| Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2003 2:06 pm |
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Matthew>> Yeah...Totally
Wassup>> Awesome!!! You are one of My fav artists!  I really need to work on my perspective and environment BIG TIME. Flater/Blurer/abstracter really make sense...to me now. That really help me a lot. I totally appreciate your time and energy to help out a rookie like me. Yeah, I really need to work on big shape and stroke too.
BTW: This is exactly what I wanted, Thanks. This will totally help me analyze what I should do next and grow. And hopefully some day will be half as good as you guys.
Nucleardan>>
Matthew>> Thanks  , but I am still far away from being a master of anything. But master of BS (BullSh..t) is possible.
ColdKodiak>> Thanks, yes the hand oh... stronger hard edge and soft edge. um....lots to work on.
tiger1313>> 1) You mean like Wassup illustrated. OK
2) Yep
3) Thanks, I try  |
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