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xgrave
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 2:23 am     Reply with quote
PT8, 30hours+,Please C&C, Laughing

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xzacto
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 10:18 pm     Reply with quote
very nice man, a bit "conan-esque" but great style, nice use of smoothing. careful not to draw the life out of your images tho. keep up the good work
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JohnnyPixel
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 5:03 am     Reply with quote
Overall good piece and nice composition
the perspective on the arm and the thighs seem to be kind off
the face is very pretty but feels a lil emotionless but that's ok it looks good actually gives it more character
the horses is pretty nice
I like the smooth renderings
now I know it's a WIP but the sky in the back
you have a very bright blue
and yet none of the blue is reflecting onto ur main objects so try to take that into account.

Overall very good job and a lot of hard work good Luck
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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 25, 2003 2:30 pm     Reply with quote
Stick to your lightsource, this image desperately needs direction and focus. It's looking pretty good as far as the rendering goes, but it really needs to be tightened up compositionally. Looks like you used a porn image as ref, am I right?
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xgrave
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 25, 2003 6:08 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks everybody.I know the light sourse need to be improved.and more detail will be added.the face and upper body I use one of my Monica Bellucci's DVD cover as reference
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xgrave
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 30, 2003 1:36 am     Reply with quote
Do some detail,please C&C
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