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xgrave junior member
Member # Joined: 16 Sep 2003 Posts: 12 Location: China
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 2:23 am |
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PT8, 30hours+,Please C&C,
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Last edited by xgrave on Thu Oct 30, 2003 1:45 am; edited 1 time in total |
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xzacto member
Member # Joined: 20 Oct 2003 Posts: 91 Location: Rochester, New York (farmington)
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 10:18 pm |
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very nice man, a bit "conan-esque" but great style, nice use of smoothing. careful not to draw the life out of your images tho. keep up the good work _________________
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JohnnyPixel junior member
Member # Joined: 24 Oct 2003 Posts: 9 Location: California
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Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 5:03 am |
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Overall good piece and nice composition
the perspective on the arm and the thighs seem to be kind off
the face is very pretty but feels a lil emotionless but that's ok it looks good actually gives it more character
the horses is pretty nice
I like the smooth renderings
now I know it's a WIP but the sky in the back
you have a very bright blue
and yet none of the blue is reflecting onto ur main objects so try to take that into account.
Overall very good job and a lot of hard work good Luck _________________
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2003 2:30 pm |
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Stick to your lightsource, this image desperately needs direction and focus. It's looking pretty good as far as the rendering goes, but it really needs to be tightened up compositionally. Looks like you used a porn image as ref, am I right? |
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xgrave junior member
Member # Joined: 16 Sep 2003 Posts: 12 Location: China
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2003 6:08 pm |
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Thanks everybody.I know the light sourse need to be improved.and more detail will be added.the face and upper body I use one of my Monica Bellucci's DVD cover as reference |
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xgrave junior member
Member # Joined: 16 Sep 2003 Posts: 12 Location: China
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Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2003 1:36 am |
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Do some detail,please C&C |
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