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fransua
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Al Ian
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You have tallent. I personaly think its wasted drawing that kind of stuff. What else have you done?
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| Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2003 6:04 pm |
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hahahahahahahaha.. ahem..
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| Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2003 3:02 am |
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The second one, bottom righthand corner...umm...bird hunting, is she? 
Anyhow, something is very wrong with her midsection and her legs are a bit too long. Her ass might make it very hard for her to aim. Other than that, it's totally believable! 
Oh, if you're gonna add lens flares, turn them up!! People here love them.  |
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| Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2003 5:24 pm |
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| These aren't really "characters" so much as "naked women." Characters need something to make them unique, some kind of personality. The drawings aren't too bad, though the anatomy could use some work, but I can't really see much purpose in these drawings other than personal enjoyment. Which isn't a bad thing in itself, but if you're trying to develop characters, think more about personality and less about sex. |
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godee
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| Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2003 2:55 pm |
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tinschu is right and all..
...but i like the penicil version of the first one.. it looks like you put effort and precision into it and that shows..
maybe a little more shading for lighting and tweak the values in photoshop to darken the pencils down to black.. just a thought.
yea.. and work on your anatomy.. even tho your exageration is kinda funny in places (second one top right - ass).
excellent use of lensflares btw 
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