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Wren
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I just finished up a small piece for a close friend of mine who works for a sword crafter at the local renaissance festival. It's for a t-shirt design to promote Badger Blades and i just wanted to get some feedback and overall impressions about it. Mostly i am trying to determine if the message is clear enough or if it seems too much like an inside joke or not.
All critiques and comments are welcome of course, but general reactions are really what i am after. Thanks.
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| Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2003 11:15 am |
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Wow, 126 views and no one has a single thing to say about it? Is it so bad it left everyone speechless? 
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AndyT
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| Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2003 11:21 am |
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I don't get it but that's probably because I'm German.
I'm not sure how easy it will be to read this on a t-shirt.
I like how the two important words from the domain are bolder than the rest of text.
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| Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2003 9:55 pm |
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it looks good but ill work a bit more ont the paper texture
 the menssage it is pretty clear bw.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2003 7:00 am |
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I'd texture the paper more, like maxetormer said. It's too flat and shiny now.
The message makes sense to me, but probablly 'cause I know Badger.  |
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Wren
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| Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2003 7:30 am |
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Thanks for the replies everyone. As far as the paper texture goes, there is some texture to the paper, but it kind of got lost in the size reduction. Plus i didn't want too much texture on it, since it's going to be printed on cloth. I've learned from doing t-shirt designs in the past that complex textures don't always read well on textiles.
i'm still waiting to hear back on whether or not they are going to use this idea on a t-shirt. Hopefully they will because i want one for myself. 
crazylittleelf, that is cool that you know Badger! I've not met him but I have met Imp (who is sort of spearheading the t-shirt project with my friend) and of course Phil who runs the booth. I can only imagine that he is a very fun and interesting person based on what i have heard.
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