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RebbelX
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I just started making Wallpapers hence this isnt to great of one but i would realy appreciate it if i could get some constructive C&C on this peice because i know its definatly not done. Any suggestions or tips for me would be great thnx....
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RebbelX
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gamerplus
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| Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2003 7:40 pm |
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nice wallpaper but u got a lot going on in it 
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| Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2003 8:05 am |
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| You have some nice designs in there, but if this is for a wallpaper, then it's too busy and crowded. Too much text. If you want to have that much text, it can't all be competing for attention. Also, you should try livening up your text a little more. Either use a more fitting font or stylize what you have, because as it is now I see bright white Arial lettering, which is less than attractive, especially for a sleek design like the one you seem to be aiming for. Try to make all the elements work together, not against each other, and remember to keep it simple! It's a wallpaper, it can't be too distracting. |
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