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Drunken Monkey
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I am starting to work on my college portfolio, this is one of the pics for it. I would love to hear some feedback and critique on this.
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Matthew
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| Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2003 1:28 pm |
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Very cool design, I love it. :)
see you
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| Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2003 1:46 pm |
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| Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2003 1:58 pm |
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Hm...the concept and design are pretty neat. I'm not getting a sense of scale here, though -- the two ends of the arch look like they're only a hundred or so yards apart. Maybe if you made the far end lighter and smalle,r it would make the structure look bigger. But, you know, take that advice with a grain of salt since I rarely know what I'm talking about.
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| Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2003 6:59 am |
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I like the concept and the rendering of this image a lot!
but maybe you could push the envelope a little more.
I made a quick overpaint (which I will take down instantly if you wish) to show what I mean..
sorry to fumble around with your image..
I am aware that the overpaint sucks.
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Drunken Monkey
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| Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2003 7:02 pm |
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Matthew, thanks dude! Lessee some more of those fig drawings of yours ;]
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Iliya: I feel the same way... didnt know if anyone else saw it like that. I will figure out a way to fix it. Rubber Duck migh have done just that actually. Thanks for the crit!
Rubber Duck: Dude no way! You did what i tried but couldnt. You not only made it look bigger but also added those highlights which i failed to find. I'll be fixing this image in a short while and will post the updated version here. Really appreciate the paintover. And those clouds are way better too.
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| Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2003 4:03 pm |
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Before I scrolled down, I immediately thought,  HALO!! Well, so what if it's not halo? It's still great, I'm excited to see the updated version. Very neat concept!
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