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dante x
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Merystic
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I like them
Good composition overall.
The first one really creeps me out, a true sign of a good concept. good job 
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Light
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| Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2003 10:56 pm |
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I like these a lot, and they are good.
Only suggestion I can say really is keep working, and dont try to make any clothes or objects cover for any problems in art.
I'm not seeing that here but the unerlying anatomy is a little flat. But these are very strong.
I like the second one a lot. But they are all good. |
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Wren
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| Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2003 6:00 am |
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I love the first and last pieces! Dynamic, fluid, overall very strong images.
The second one i am little less impressed with. I love the concept, it's downright creepy, but the anatomy has some distracting flaws (like the nipples being way out of alignment and the hands are a little flat looking) and the lighting seems a bit inconsistent in areas (mostly on the hands and arms). But, given the skill you've displayed in the other two pieces, i think you'd have no trouble refining the nightmare picture to be equally impressive.
Awesome stuff, though. Keep it coming!
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dante x
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| Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2003 6:25 am |
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| Wren wrote: |
I love the first and last pieces! Dynamic, fluid, overall very strong images.
The second one i am little less impressed with. I love the concept, it's downright creepy, but the anatomy has some distracting flaws (like the nipples being way out of alignment and the hands are a little flat looking) and the lighting seems a bit inconsistent in areas (mostly on the hands and arms). But, given the skill you've displayed in the other two pieces, i think you'd have no trouble refining the nightmare picture to be equally impressive.
Awesome stuff, though. Keep it coming! |
I was afraid that might have been the problem with the second one, and it's kind of interesting that you, Light, and probably others noticed it's flatness. That picture, which is older then the other two, was a fairly complicated project where we had to take the inked sketch of a man, add our self portrait, use the skull found in another artists work ( can't remember her name), and it had to have exposed skeletal parts. So it all kinda ended up being a cut in paste project. But I do suck at trying to represent a definitive light source without using any refrences. And feet. I HATE'EM!
I am kinda interested in trying it again, and if I find time I just might.
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