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neff
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Bah, i hate thias anatomystuff 
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see
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| Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2003 1:02 am |
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although you used much light the girl looks flat. Maybe because of the outline which is still visible at arms. and there is no shadow which could increase the deep of your art.
Feets are visible but floor not ... 
yes there are some anatomy mistakes but the are not that heavy but check the head.
i like the colors! |
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Matthew
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| Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2003 1:25 am |
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Anatomy stuff is really tricky, yea.
I really like the colors too but I agree with what see said above though I am not fund of to give crits nowadays but it seems you know where you problem lays already.
Otherwise I think you are improving here in the Sijun so keep up the good work.
see you
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bellas
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| Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2003 2:02 am |
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nice, only dislike me white color lights in hair
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Frode
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| Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2003 2:11 am |
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-Her face is very flat... except for the nose, everything is in one line.
-The arms seem a bit straight as well, hardly any variaty in thickness. And they're very thin.
-And yeah, the coloured lighting on the hair looks weird.
But for the rest like the lighting and outfit. it's great.
EDIT: Oh, and she reminds me of Electra from Daredevil. |
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