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Alan · Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2003 2:45 am

it had been awhile since i'd painted a female figure, so did this one..

so how bad did i mangle the anatomy, eh?

-Alan

Tinusch · Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2003 8:54 am

Anatomy looks pretty good to me, but the face is a little awkward. Definitely looks good overall, though. Background is pretty ugly, I have to say, it definitely detracts from the subject. I like this, though. Keep it up.

Ylla · Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2003 5:58 am

her face is definatelly wierd... i think pinups are supposed to have girls with sexy, attractive faces, not just any face.

the front boob is much bigger than the back boob.

her leg is kinda thick, especially compared to how thin her waist is...

her butt jutts out too much.

and her feet, as disguised by the shoes as they are, they are too narrow across the middle.

i think you have great potential though. why don't you try another one?
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Aikon_B · Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2003 3:02 am

yeah if your doin a "pin-up" i'd def change the face, another thing i didn't see anyone say is... her skin looks very cellulite "overpowered" or somethin,

average "whitegirl" booty, but it does go a lil far to the right...heh...

but you have a pretty good grasp on how to color, i agree w/ the background bein pretty homely...

but i'm pretty n00b so you don't gotta listen to me Laughing

yours is lookin better than mine prolly would Rolling Eyes

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Alan · Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2003 10:48 pm

thanx for the feedback people...

i agree the face is off, although i was going for a 'girl next door' look. maybe not the best for pinup Smile

this was a sketch painting but i got caught up in messing about with it too much, i think.. well, i'll post another soon..

bellas · Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2003 1:30 am

dislike me hands and face
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