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echo · junior member Member # Joined: 17 Jul 2003 Posts: 7

Constructive criticism please - I need to finish it up.

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Mephiston · Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2003 7:29 am

Cool drawing, and really nice background, colors and typography. I like it Wink

( not very constructive, but I can't say anything else Wink

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DRESDEN · Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2003 8:17 am

nice piece. i think that you should add a bit more folds on her clothing to define her torso a bit more. maybe give a light source on one of her face to add some more depth. nice colors, good piece.

amichaels · member Member # Joined: 28 Mar 2003 Posts: 105

I really like the muted reflection on the shield. Looks excellent! Is it for one of Silver Ravenwolf's books?

echo · junior member Member # Joined: 17 Jul 2003 Posts: 7

Yes, they're republishing them. I wanted to get some feedback on the art. Thanks for the great comments. Smile

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MozArt · Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2003 5:36 pm

Lovely piece you've made there...

but i think there's something wrong with the hair, the "hair roots" goes to far up/back, that's only my opinion, but it bothers me a bit

Keep up the good work
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eigam · junior member Member # Joined: 04 Apr 2003 Posts: 32

Nice piece, the style is very Art Nuevo. Over all a well designed piece.