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Dodge
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 Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2003 1:56 pm |
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I enjoyed doing this, one day & two page comic. my first finished comic pages.
Any C & C Appreaciated
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Godwin
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| Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2003 6:43 pm |
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colour?
i think the style isnt appropriate for colour, i think... dont read many comics, all you can do is really fill up the white spaces with different colours, unless you have other plans
nice work btw
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Ylla
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| Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2003 4:11 am |
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i would appreciate seeing some thinner lines, both white and black. it kinda looks like the smallest brush you had to work with didn't give you the room to paint as small as you wanted 
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Dodge
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| Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2003 1:42 am |
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Godwin: Thanks, yeh guess it would be hard to colour, lots of black here.
Yilla: Thanks for the comment, yeh i know thinner lines would give more detail. For the amount of time i spent on it, just one day to plan, design, rough pencil, clean pencil and then ink, i was happy to trade off detail for more of a story.  maybe next time i do this i will have improved to add more detail in the same time frame. |
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