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Al Ian
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OK, I am trying a non-cartoon style Jedi now. Not sure how this is gonna turn out. Any crits on the line art thus far?
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| Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2003 12:44 pm |
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It looks like there is just a wee bit too much jaw past where his neck meets his head. His hands also need a bit of tweaking, and the trenchcoat could use some more folds to give it movement. I would also work on the saber, and make it flatter and more bladelike. Add a hint of a hilt too. Good stuff otherwise.
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| Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2003 4:19 pm |
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I see what you mean on most area's.
Moved the jaw line, added wrinkles in the coat. Started to clean up the rendering. I left the blade rounded as flat just dosent look like a light saber. Also added a slight hint of a hilt at the bottum.
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| Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2003 12:48 pm |
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| Is the light saber the only light source? Cause if it is, the shirt he's wearing should have a yellow tinge to it due to the colour of the light hitting it. |
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