[Bobuke]

no reference, still no vacom - it must be like heaven to get rid of this mouse!!


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[Probustion]

well it's good considering it's done without reference and with a mouse. a few comments though:
the hip part is too wide, the shouder-bones protude to much, and the neck is bent in an awkward way. in some places more definition is needed. that's why the arm looks a little off(the ulnae bone should be visible). i'm sorry, don't want to rip it all apart(i'm still struggling with anatomy myself) but these are the things i noticed. i highly suggest reading Burne Hogarth's figure drawing if you haven't done already.
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[Bobuke]

Please, Probustion, don�t think that you are ripping it all apart - you are really welcome with your comments. When I did this one I really wanted

to try to work fast, my everlasting struggle...
to work from fantasy and...
to catch a feeling

That doesn�t mean I am less happy to get C&C�s, no,no I am more than happy to get other peoples oppinion about their first reaction on my pictures.It�s so useful because I easily get blind when I�ve worked for a while and I�m still really working hard to get used to all theese possibilities you have when painting digitally!
So, Probustion I made a new try to fix the things you pointed out for me, exept for the hip part that I didn�t want to make smaller as it is the feeling of a mature woman I want to catch....

Don�t hesitate to give me more C&C�s on this one - it�s fun to read.


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[Xyster21]

For some reason its not loading or showing up... Bleh
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