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Grenadine
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 Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2003 5:11 am |
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hi!
A new pic of my automn faerie!!
please tell me what's wrong! 
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Chthonic Divinity
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| Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2003 2:03 pm |
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well i really love your style, but i'd have to say for constructive crits, i dont really like the bottom right corner... how it just fades out like that. seems rushed/unfinished there. if you want to block that hand (?) you could put some foliage in the foreground there maybe.
really is quite nice though |
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AndyT
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| Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2003 4:43 pm |
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I love the style. Its refreshing and colorful without being too busy IMO.
You could try to seperate light and shadow more but I'm not sure if that would actually be better.
Her face and torso look rather static while her forearms suggest that she is moving.
If she's supposed to look as if she's walking you cold maybe change the angle of her hips or shoulders (the next time).
I think it's great that a front view can be that interesting though
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Ylla
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| Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2003 1:39 am |
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i like the coloring, but no part of the drawing says "fairy" to me anywhere, really...
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Artie
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| Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2003 12:34 pm |
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| I must agree with Ylla. Your picture associates Pipi Long Stocking from Astrid Lindgren instead. Otherwise, good work |
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