[Nocturnal]

I don't usually post any of my work anywhere because i suck but i really wanna try to get better so here goes....



i know the white background is an eyesore to alot of you but like i said.. i'm a noob so i'm working on that.. little baby steps. C&C is extremely welcomed. desperate in fact..

-Nocturnal

[Iddi]

I think the arms and legs are too plain. And that visor too. Put on some sencors or something.
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[Probustion]

i think it's nice. i see you used polykarbon's tutorial. but ok, that's what a tutorial is for. there's a problem with the pelvis though. it's turned in an awkward way. i'm not sure how you can fix it best, but i think it looks more stable if the pelvis runs parallel with the torso
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[Nocturnal]

Right on Probustion. I guess i should have added that in there. i'm working on totally changing it aroun though. i'm not happy with the shoulder pads or those lights on his shoulders. His arms are a bit odd to me as well.. a little too fat. and I see what you mean about the pelvis. I suck at perspective. Thanks for the crits Prob. and Iddi. I'll probably post the updated one tonight.

-Nocturnal