[Probustion]

if you don't approve this picture speak now or forever hold your peace

just bought my first easle, and it's actually quite addictive to draw standing.
the drawing expanded from a simple sketch from nudie ref into this. i think it maybe ready to go into ps now. any comments and critiques appreciated, thanks


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talent is overrated.

[biggerbob]

im no expert here, but i think her shoulders need to be a bit more slack. the squareness of them kind of gives her a masculine build. Oh, and her chin needs to be a little less square for the same reason.

[Probustion]

yep, i see it now. these parts troubled me a few hours ago, but after a night without sleep the facts just come right at ya

thanks!
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talent is overrated.

[amichaels]

Her right breast also looks kinda funny. It's lumpy on one side.

[grenade]

hi !
maybe head is too small ? REst is on good way i think keep it up !
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[Bobuke]

Hello Probustion
A bride of your dreams... I�m sure she will be beautiful when you are finished!

To show you my thoughts I made an overpaint... and enlarged some parts of your drawing that makes it look more right to me.

Her left overarm is very nicely drawn. Her underarm though you have to fix - it seems twisted in some odd way...(it is also too small, but I haven�t changed that in my overpaint) Her right arm needs too be bigger to, and to be shaped as beautiful, to compare to the other.

The upper part of her body is also very good and I think the look of her right breast is just charming unless you don�t want them to look like filled with silicon - perhaps you should give her left breast a nice natural look too!!
As a young man, of course you shall let the girl of your dreams have breasts with shape that compares to this dream so don�take my adwises for granted!

Her head - perhaps I should have started with that - needs to be enlarged too.
...and her hips seemed to small compared to her nice upper part of the body.

In the background I�ve softed the little ....is it a gatepillar?...and the small wall - they were to much accentuated.

Hope this will help you to go on with it! Good luck - I will look for her again!

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