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jolen
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 Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2004 4:17 pm |
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i would be happy if somebody comments. and tell me what's good and waths bad
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AndyT
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| Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2004 4:45 pm |
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You should compress them more I guess. They take forever to load.
I don't like the white backgrounds. And the line/shading combination doesn't work for me.
It reminds me a lot of my own stuff that I'm not happy with.
I like the drawings. They show potential ... poses, perspective and so on.
Proportions are exaggerated but ok ... I just don't like the long torsos.
But all the details are weird somehow. I'd study faces, hands and feet.
Keep it up! What tools do you use btw?
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the_insider
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| Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2004 10:14 pm |
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i think these would be awesome if you rendered them more...not really diggin the swordsman but i like the others if you progressed a bit more...i like that yellow figure...permission to paintover???
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jolen
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| Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2004 12:19 am |
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Thanks for the crit 
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i use a wacmo tablet and OpenCanvas :s except for the swordsman, i did that i photoshop, and the torso i did with ink and watercolor
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| ...permission to paintover??? |
sure ^^ |
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