[Haru]

anew pic i am still wokring on
well i am doing this for a comp. at another board ,..sort of team up with a colorist of that board m..anyway i need some help on the arm holding the bow ,..it just doesn't look right ...but i can't put my hand on it ,...i would be great if you guys could help me ,..thank alot !

[Drew]

ithink m , you need to try 2 2 make tha imagee wroks. ill bhappy2commentonitthenokthanksbyE!

[geoman2k]

i really likethe pose and clothing. his face looks great, and the arrow in his mouth is a fantastic touch. i think what you need to work on is the left arm... something about it seems wrong. i think it might be a little too short, and his shoulder should be more prominent. i also noticed that the sleeve on his right arm drapes down a way, while the left arm doesn't. i'm guessing yo0u did this intentionally for his costume, but i think you should make the sleeves match. it would balance the charactor more and make his arm look bigger.
hope that is helpfull

ps: widden it up and make him shooting something... perhaps an org or goblin or something. thats allways fun
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[Haru]

Geoman : thanks alot for repleying ,...the bad part is that i have already finished the pic so i aint gonna change a thing though ,.......now about the point you mentioned:
indeed i did it on purpose , the htought behind it was that this way the sleeve never vould be in the way of shooting that arrow for instance that the sleeve would lay on his hand it would bother him or something .....about the arm indeed your are right abouyt that to the is to low on the pic ,...
untentionally i wanted to add something more to the pic ,...but i got lazy and did putted any more time in it ,....
btw. here is the finished pic