[xLady Fx]

This Is The Firtst Time I Collored One Of My Drawings

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[khroma]

The line art is definitely very cool. I think you should try to add a bit more depth to the character with some shading. Those bubbles look like they need a bit more work. =) You've really got some pencil skills though.

[Qin]

yeah cool line work and pencil work. The body form is good. Maybe one thing to improve is the face/head and its features , don't know, the head just looks a bit funny to me, sort of out of place.
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[PhatTexta]

the axis of the face is in the wrong position, read loomis' head and hands book its great.. i think u can find it only as jpegs but its good to get the book

[CwStone]

yea the face and many other parts of her body are not really proportioned well and some of the anatomy is off too. But especially the face...i agree with what texta said.
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[Smurf]

i have drawing the head and hands in pdf format If somone knows where i can upload it Ill do it (its 20. some odd mb) Yeah what texta said
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