[Zipperhead]

I've pretty much given up on this image, till I work out how to paint a face proper. (and everything else) I like the idea of the picture it just seems nothing fits, I think I will redo it, but from sketch upward rather than fixing this one up, oh its about 8-9 hours work, I don't think it was a waste of time, cause I learnt a lot, but yeah... needs redoing




I posted it here because in my mind it isn't finshed even If Im not going to touch this Psd again.
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[Drew]

I like the textures. You just need to work on your anatomy and you should be able to put together something really nice.

[noxi]

I think there could be one thing that could really save the pic. Ok, the atmosphere and mood are good in it. I definetly would add alot of black thick outlines everywhere. For some reason the chick with the gun looks pasted. Hard fix afterwards i think. So that�s why i think hard outlines would be a good option. Sure you could loose alot of realism but you could get nice dark comic style picture with artistic features...

Good luck with the work. It has hope left...much even!

//edit: nice typos...

[Zipperhead]

Ph34r my use of typos!
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[eyalyab]

hi
the lighting needs lots of tweaking. they make the picture look very flat and not 3 dimentional. the grass behind the door looks like its a wallpaper rather than landscape..
the shaddow's angle suggests lighting from a direction, that would make the door cast a shaddow on the cop-girl, rather than the cop girl casting shadow on the door. the lighting on the face is nothing like the lighting on the rest of the body, and there are also places on hert clothing where there is lighting from an unknown source..
the idea of the image is nice, just some minor things like lighting ruin it.
anyway, those are my thought.. still, good job.

edit: p.s: nice texturing!

[CwStone]

well, in ur new one (if ur gonna make a new one) i suggest make the overrall lighting in the bg (the next room) be blue, and then have some edge lighting on her left (our left)

edge lighting fixes all.

ands yea, sketching before scanning helps a hella lot.
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-Chase