Sijun Forums Forum Index
Log in to check your private messages
My Profile Search Who's Online Member List FAQ Register Login Sijun Forums Forum Index

This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.
   Sijun Forums Forum Index >> Work in Progress
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author   Topic : "Departure"
andreasrocha
member


Member #
Joined: 11 Jul 2003
Posts: 138
Location: Lisbon / Portugal

PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2003 6:56 am     Reply with quote
Photoshop 7. I'll try and keep posting the progress on this one, based on comments. This way it'll keep me going...

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
andreasrocha
member


Member #
Joined: 11 Jul 2003
Posts: 138
Location: Lisbon / Portugal

PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2003 7:45 am     Reply with quote
Corrected some perspective errors. Boosted up the sunset tones. Widened the overall floor reflections.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
andreasrocha
member


Member #
Joined: 11 Jul 2003
Posts: 138
Location: Lisbon / Portugal

PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2003 9:15 am     Reply with quote
Changed the transport's front and developed the sunset a bit further.

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
HardCoil
member


Member #
Joined: 26 Dec 2000
Posts: 88
Location: Odense, Denmark

PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2003 12:52 pm     Reply with quote
Looks cool, but if the transport thingie is supposed to be resting on the ground, the perspective still seems a bit off. Shouldn't the vanishing lines meet at the horizon ?
_________________
HardCoil
--------------------
Sie ist der hellste Sterne von Allen
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Phyrexial
junior member


Member #
Joined: 31 Oct 2002
Posts: 49
Location: New York, USA

PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2003 2:05 pm     Reply with quote
I'm an art newbie, so I can't offer you any help as far as the technical stuff that most of the other people here can, but I can offer you my opinion and do some of the grunt work for you.

For example, in response to Hard Coil's post about the vanishing points, I edited your pic a bit. Hope you don't mind.

With lines guiding to vanishing point:


Without the lines:


I hope that helps. Also, I hope I did that right... Rolling Eyes
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
andreasrocha
member


Member #
Joined: 11 Jul 2003
Posts: 138
Location: Lisbon / Portugal

PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2003 5:54 am     Reply with quote
Last update...but I'm not happy with it. I guess I won't continue this one. On to the next...

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
noxi
member


Member #
Joined: 04 Jul 2003
Posts: 281
Location: Finland

PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2003 4:52 am     Reply with quote
What is the ground material? It looks like ice but is it?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
CwStone
member


Member #
Joined: 27 Jan 2003
Posts: 489
Location: New York, USA

PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2003 6:52 am     Reply with quote
water.

and andreas u cant stop wit this pic it looks awesome! cmon man u gotta keep it goin i wanna see it finished!

All u gotta do is fix the angle probs (if there are any left), and just refin everything a bit and itl be done
_________________
-Chase
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Display posts from previous:   
This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.    Sijun Forums Forum Index -> Work in Progress All times are GMT - 8 Hours
Page 1 of 1

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum




Powered by phpBB © 2005 phpBB Group