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MacJ · Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2003 1:27 am

This is my second sculpture from a portrait sculpture class. I welcome any comments and critiques.

Mon · Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2003 1:44 am

Great portrait! I'd love to see a profile shot of that one.

I think your teacher has already told you this, but I think you should remove the tentacles, arms and the other stuff that doesn't really belong in there. To me it looks like you're downplaying your art with that stuff, it's a great portrait and it works wonderfully on it's own!

keep it up
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MacJ · Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2003 2:04 am

Hey, thanks for your comments. Just for your info, those aren't tentacles, his neck is a tree trunk, and those are branches, not hands. Here's a profile.

Bobuke · Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2003 3:35 am

Really a sensitive and beautiful sculpture of an old man but I agree that it works on it�s own without the three trunk. It could though have been a task to make a portrait out of a three and if so u have done an excellent job, I think! Wink

I would love to see moore of your sculptures... Smile

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PhatTexta · Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2003 6:27 am

this makes me wanna start sculpture..

viag · Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2003 8:11 am

its really nice , great sens of volume

bengal · Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2003 8:14 am

that's super great. the face, the ears are incredible!
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