[kariefury]

Hello, I finished this girl the other day critique would be apreciated. I had a bit of trouble with making the star's on the wing's shiney and abrazed metal like looking. The hands' also gave me trouble. I didn't give it a background yet because it's a girl for a rave flyer just I do not know what party yet so no background. Another thing not quite right for me are her boobs. The shadow is wrong or something.


The URL incase the image didn't work:
http://kariefury.tripod.com/crazywings.jpg

[kariefury]

I drew her at 300res and I just noticed now that I srank it down her eyes look like black holes. I'll remember that for next picture to. Also her crown was another hard thing I couldn't get it to look like it was made of little pearl beads it only looked wavy.

And I posted this in finished gallery not wip gallery because I'll probably not draw more into it I'll just try a different picture using thing's I learn by asking for help on this one. (if I try and make one perfect I'd never draw anything else)

[Critical Pete]

Hmm... Her breasts are really off... Same with her hands... So, since you're not going to rework this, I'd suggest working on anatomy and proportions some more. I like the eyes though...