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Michael la-Cour
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A little test of lighting.
I'd like a little feedback
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Michael la-Cour
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| Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2003 2:23 pm |
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An update
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| Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2003 2:31 pm |
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i think her right breast is turned too far towards the viewer. from the way her sholders are, it would seem to me that both breasts should be pointing forwards.
my 2 cents
btw the lighting looks great. i thikn you should darken the wings in a lot more, they are too bright and stand out too much 
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Michael la-Cour
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| Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2003 3:44 pm |
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Thanks for the Input geoman...
I've tried to correct the mistakes. And it looks to me you where right.
Anyway, I'm at the state where I don't want to put very much more work into it.
So if anyone has some final ideas/critiques let me know:
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Tomasis
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| Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2003 5:15 pm |
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not enough..
did you have seen much silicon breasts? 
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Michael la-Cour
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| Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2003 5:39 pm |
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Not enough I guess hehe...
Blast my female colleague. She said that it was correct.
Well not much to do about it now. I'm off to bed.
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Eric Pommer
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| Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2003 10:39 am |
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This is an interesting image, with lots of positive stuff going on. Since you asked about light, one thing that struck me was that although the figure seems lit from below, the wings cast shadows as if they are lit from above. It's not a huge deal, but something to think about.
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