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Zdeto
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 19, 2003 6:18 am     Reply with quote
Hi ppl,

Inspired and motivated by your pictures, I've bought a cheap graphic table and started playing with it and Painter 7.
A reference photo was used, and this is the result. I'm waiting for some feedback and advice. It's not a work in progress, but I didn't dare to post it on the gallery/finnished artwork section. Smile


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RJPJR
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 19, 2003 1:31 pm     Reply with quote
not bad, not bad at all.. in fact for a first attempt thats really good, a few things: work on your shading and definition of certain lines could be improved but overall its a really good first attempt..

One thing for consideration though, the composition of the picture leaves a small triangle of shading between her legs I suggest you crop that off because it draws the eye of the viewer towards it..

Keep up the good work!
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Matthew
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 19, 2003 1:42 pm     Reply with quote
Hey

I really like the coloring, beside that is a little bit too blurry it looks really good. I agree with RJPJR and also about the the triangle he commented, you could resize the picture and show the legs a little bit more to avoid the triangle.
Anyway, Gruesome.

Keep up the good work and don�t be afraid to post in the Gallery finished.
Matthew
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Zorglub
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 19, 2003 8:16 pm     Reply with quote
Nice! The skin tones look really nice. especially on that one hand.
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