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unss10
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 Posted: Tue May 27, 2003 10:54 pm |
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hi guys.. iam totally digitalart n00b. but anyways.. can you give me sum
comments and critique for this work in process image...
spent 10-12 hours with this already i think. photo based ofcourse...
www.sunpoint.net/~rv1991/korentowip.jpg
and no iam not born in 1991:D
- unseen/antti
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Matthew
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| Posted: Wed May 28, 2003 7:43 am |
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Hey
I gotta ask, where is espoo?
Looks good so far, just to start with refining and touch up the detail on your piece.
keep it up
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unss10
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| Posted: Wed May 28, 2003 8:41 am |
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well espoo is at southern part of finland near capitol city helsinki.. 
i supposed to put there finland but anyways...
thanks...
i finish picture soon and i can post it to finished pictures section, hopefully...
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Timid
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| Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2003 3:36 pm |
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Howdy,
Espoo / Esbo is officially a city or something but is more like suburbs that are sprawled around Helsinki.
Did you finish this piece?
Are you using layers to do it? If you used layers, you might have less trouble with unwanted interaction between the colors. But I think the colors themselves are good, clean. Perhaps you could consider leaving more space on the right of the dragonfly so it feels a little bit less cramped? Also, it's usually more interesting if the object of the image isn't placed exactly in the center.
I love dragonflies. Beautiful creatures... Hope you finish it!
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