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Finer member
Member # Joined: 10 Oct 2000 Posts: 125 Location: Norway
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2003 8:40 pm |
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dont think I posted this here...
painted in photoshop
give me some feedback _________________ / Anders
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Sumaleth Administrator
Member # Joined: 30 Oct 1999 Posts: 2898 Location: Australia
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2003 9:04 pm |
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Another great image, AF. Although - at least on my monitor - the character is just a little bit too much of a silhouette. I'd love to see a little more reflected light on him, just so we can see what he's about. _________________ Art Links Archive -- Artists and Tutorials |
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Capt. Fred member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 1425 Location: South England
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2003 12:22 am |
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On my monitor he looks totally great. The background buildings are awesome.
I wonder if his arms are the same physical length I think they probably are.
The the thing I thought straight away is that that piece of wreckage makes me uncomfortable becuase it's heavy twisted metal torn up but still tenously linked in this one place incredibly thin and delicate. I feel storngly uncomfortable about it and I would like it better if the rweckage was not linked in this way.
But obviously it's totally sweet kick-ass stuff, becuase it's Finer, innit. Love his clothing. Is he quite high up the pic considering the perpsective? Probably not.
Awesome dude. Did my best to find flaws and I haven't done very well. |
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SolarC member
Member # Joined: 23 Jul 2001 Posts: 274 Location: Barcelona
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2003 11:15 pm |
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Well here is my two feedback cents.
I feel that the dark values in the figure doesn't fit into the background too well. I might have lighten the figure to have same values as in the metallic pieces above the figure or have something as dark as the figure in the foreground of the picture.
The other thing is his mask, I think there is a minor perspective error or deformation. It's a small thing, but your image is so accurately done otherwise it sort of sticks out.
One last thing that comes to mind is the ribcage area of the figure. I'd recommend some more folds to the jacket to get the form of the upper torso more clear. I don't really see any mistakes in there, but I just feel that the form could be more intepreted by some more folds in the clothing there. |
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