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gogan
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medium: open canvas
time taken: ~5std
i am totally satisified with it... but im always looking for critic.. so..
i had no idea for the background.. so it staid brown.. hm...
i hope i will get many answer with good critik.. so bye
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Al Ian
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| Posted: Sat May 03, 2003 9:44 am |
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Love the line art, great coloring and detail. Very good job!! Only thing that distracts me, wit the fine painting/smoothing on the figure and background, the fire seems unfinished. Still has very broad unrefined strokes. Other then that, AWSOME!
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AndyT
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| Posted: Sat May 03, 2003 11:11 am |
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You can be satisfied with it. I agree .... very good job.
Maybe the flame should have a different color ... more pinkish.
And I think the other (blue?) lightsource wouldn't have any effect on the lower half of the image.
Maybe on face and hair only. The light of that flame would be too strong I guess.
Maybe you can keep the color of the flame and make the highlights orange
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the next time! I guess you won't continue to work on that image!?
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gogan
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| Posted: Sat May 03, 2003 11:26 am |
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thank you...
hm no.. i dont continue this image.... no time... i have to learn so much for school the next weeks.. but maybe later this year  .. |
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| Posted: Sat May 03, 2003 12:24 pm |
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There has to be mo' eye candy... let's see...
Weeeeell, maybe not da perfect deal but there ya go.
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gogan
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| Posted: Sat May 03, 2003 12:39 pm |
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hey that looks cool...
the fireball is great.. hum... maybe i should work on it...especially on the fireball.. hm... |
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gogan
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| Posted: Mon May 05, 2003 10:33 am |
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so i worked on it.. and now.. i think.. its perfekt...i'm done... so.. no i`ve to learn.. bye..
thx.. for the crits..
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| Posted: Mon May 05, 2003 1:29 pm |
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| For some reason I don't like the ears. They look stiff to me. But i'm not sure why. |
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Hyptosis
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| Posted: Mon May 05, 2003 4:09 pm |
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Very nice, i like it.
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