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Northman
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PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2003 3:10 pm     Reply with quote
well, I've taken so much from frequent visits to this place in the way of inspiration and infectious enthusiasm I figured I ought to try and contribute to the ambience around here so here's a pic.



You've all inspired me to finally start updating my web site. Hope this works. This is my first post.
Web site at http://www.angusmckie.com
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RJPJR
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PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2003 2:04 pm     Reply with quote
Creepy! It looks like the cover to a sci-fi novel! I like it
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PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2003 5:13 pm     Reply with quote
i no this is a stupid question but all the work on that website is urs, correct? If so, well, thats quite impressive stuff.

As for this one - i really like it, very interesting. I only have one minor (actually, very minor) crit: The head of the robot looks a lil more detailed than the bottom half, like its less blury or somethin. I just think that maby u could make the bottom half a little darker in the shaded parts and lighter in the highlighted parts...But its not that important and it looks great the way it is. U could also make the bg darker to make the robot and the light thing its reachin for stand out more.

Anyway keep up the good work!
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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2003 12:13 am     Reply with quote
Hello

Very good work on detail and stuff.
I don�t want to sound harsch but the character looks very flat, something that could be fixed with a more distinct lighting. I made a paintover to show what I mean, I simply sprayed black paint on the areas that I wanted to give shadow and it helps if you want to give the character a more round feeling.
If you don�t like my picture or my crit I will take the picture down.



I hope it helped you out.
Matthew
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Northman
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PostPosted: Tue May 06, 2003 5:08 am     Reply with quote
[quote="Matthew"]Hello

Very good work on detail and stuff.
I don�t want to sound harsch but the character looks very flat, something that could be fixed with a more distinct lighting. I made a paintover to show what I mean, I simply sprayed black paint on the areas that I wanted to give shadow and it helps if you want to give the character a more round feeling.
If you don�t like my picture or my crit I will take the picture down.

That's ok. That's what this place is for. I had a lot of trouble with the image looking too light on different monitors. I might have screwed up the gamma. I did originally have it quite dark.

I hope it helped you out.
Matthew

It's always useful to see how other eyes see things!

Thanks for all the comments.

I'll post again soon.
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