[hdri]

need C & C for this WIP.

maybe my server doesn't allow me to post images, then you could see them here:
http://www.escena.ya.com/bitofart/
Check the paintings, where the glass of water...

[Bibbit]

Interesting drawing. I think it's too hard to find on your site, which is probably why you haven't had any replies.

First let me say I am a novice. I think this is hard to crit because I am unsure what you're looking for. The drawing has some feeling, but I think the face, nose and lips really, needs to be more realistic to match the dramatic body posture. They look flat. Also, I think she looks more like Wonder Woman than Xena. It's that tiara think on her head.

The shoulder and neck area also do not look quite right to me. Unfortunately, I can't make a suggestion on how to fix them.

At any rate, I think you've done a good job.
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[Matthew]

hey
Yeah it was very difficult to find the picture, Pintura....hmm.
what Bibbit said and one thing more, the eyes is a common error and they are not in-line in your picture, perhaps you should see more of her right eye.
It has helped me a lot when I started to flip picture horizontal, that way you see errors in the eye-line and other stuff very early in the making of your picture.

Hope it helped
Matthew