[Matt Ryan]

here is a layout i have been working on for the past few days. im turning it in tomorrow, but comments and crits would still be appreciated. thanks.


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[Matthew]

Hey
Very nice, nice colors. :)

Matthew

[silber]

hi
I like this one.
though I think the pic is hard to read.
Maybe it would help if you define some of the small objects better. Putting some cooler colors in the shadows or the objects could help too.
When I look only at the upper half of the pic it feels much better.
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[lunayasha]

I like the color shceme. Maybe you should add a litte more detail in the background.