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Timid
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This little fairy's photoshopped over a pencil-sketch I made some years ago... Fresh out of the mill.
I *say* she's finished, but I feel like there could be a few things I could improve. Don't quite know what, though. Tips, critique, anyone? 
Yipes. Hope the image is not too big. I'll shrinkify her if need be as soon as I can. |
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| Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2003 4:38 pm |
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I love fey scenes, so I'm a bit biased! Nonttheless very good mood, the only thing I find odd is the arm... I think it's too short. I really like the wings and the way the whole scene has an odd 'watching through a rainy window' color stroke to it. I likey. Anymore?
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| Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2003 2:12 pm |
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Ooh, thanks! Don't know why I didn't see the trouble with that arm before...
I'll see what I can do.
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| Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2003 3:14 pm |
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Fixified. I think.
Twiddled a bit with the colors, too..
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| Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2003 5:31 pm |
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I really like it after the color corrections. Very nice!
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| Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2003 5:53 pm |
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Very magical.... 
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| Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2003 9:42 pm |
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| Cicinimo wrote: |
| I really like it after the color corrections. Very nice! |
I agree
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| Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2003 12:37 am |
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I wanna know if you draw it by hand first and then photoshopped it ?
I am new here and a green hand, could u tell me more about your perfect works?
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Timid
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| Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2003 12:48 am |
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Perfect works? Far from it.. That's why I joined here... to improve myself.. (It's the first topic I've ever posted, too.. hrrmm...)
First... I drew the following picture (years ago) and scanned it in..
and then I fiddled with it ...
First stage
Second stage
And I guess you can see the rest here... |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2003 6:21 am |
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Thank u for u reply. My English is poor and couldn't express my thanks exactly, you know.
In fact, I feel shy when I was in the forum because of my English and knowing nothing about design...But I think everybody could praise for beautiful things...your wonderful works...
Thank u again...
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Nazarov
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| Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2003 9:27 am |
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The butterfly in the original was a nice feature, try adding one in the digital pic. The corrections in the second ver. are nice. The upper-left (from view) wing looks stiff - try letting it loose, make it longer - let ur imagination explode... With fantacy material the work isnt that set, since there is no definition what a fairy shoul look like
Mainio ty� *kumartaa* /FINNISH/ |
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| Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2003 11:46 pm |
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Thank you!
Ok, no harm in trying to stick in a butterfly there...
Unfortunately, I don't think I'll be able to do it until the next weekend! Soooo, there'll be quite a delay before I can put up the next version.
See you then!
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